The X Factor – ‘How is this transcript typical of spoken language?’
A range of spoken linguistic features appear in the
transcript to make it obvious that the text is a verbal transcript.
The first example of spoken language in the transcript is
accent and dialogue. Louis says ‘ya’ which is a typical Irish trait of its
accent and wouldn’t be seen as that in written language. Also, Tulisa says ‘smash
it’ and ‘tore it up’ which is dialogue used most commonly by young people and
the regional location of where she is from. In spoken language, it is easy to identify
where someone is from by what they say and the way they say it.
3 out of the 4 judges on the show address Mischa first when
they start talking. This is an example of spoken language because in written
language, the context makes it clear to the reader who is saying what. In
spoken language, it can be difficult to recognise who is talking to who without
addressing the reader and with no other clear communication, such as eye
contact and body language, to make it evident who the target is.
Each speaker in the text uses pauses, (.) or (1) etc., when
talking. Because speech is spontaneous, the speaker takes gaps to think about
what they are going to say next. The pauses are most common when changing the
topic from one point to the next, for example, the judges are being very
complementary of the contestant and tend to hesitate more when giving a
criticism. They might have to think more about what they are going to say
without causing a conflict or implying the wrong meaning. This happens when
Tulisa says ‘(2) erm (.) the truth is Mischa (1)’.
The point of being more hesitant when addressing a problem
links to the hedging of the judges. Not only do the judges take more pauses, but
they try and avoid saying their honest thoughts by implying something else when
giving a criticism to Mischa. For example, Tulisa says ‘The true is Mischa…
anything I say to you is only because I want you to be the best you can be…the
point that I was trying to make…’ this section of the text is a typical example
of hedging in spoken language because Tulisa might feel under pressure from
other things, such as the other judge’s complimentary comments, what the media might
say, or audience reaction, that she has to be careful about critiquing Mischa
so that she doesn’t create a negative image for herself.
The transcript also includes examples of downward
converging. For example, Louis says ‘you put it down baby girl’. Considering Louis
Walsh’s background and reputation compared to Mischa’s, he is downward
converging by making conversation but talking at her level of dialogue and
trying to fit in with her type of social group and speech. He might want to do
this to appeal to the younger audience by relating to that age and social group’s
speech, and make him seem likable by being comical. This is apparent in spoken
language where speakers adjust their speech towards or away from one another at
a different level.
Holding the floor, in which one speaker is in control of the
conversation, is often seen in spoken but not in written language. An example
of this in the transcript is when Alexandra Burke says ‘remember, it’s it’s a
ladder’, she is holding the floor by keeping the contestant in form and making
sure she isn’t being over-confident. She wants to control the situation so her
advice is heard and that she is in a higher position because she has already
had experience in the situation.
Finally, Brown and Levinson’s building the face theory in
also included in the transcript. The judges are very complementary of Mischa
and so this is building her face, implying that she is being welcomed into their
‘group’ of likeable musicians.
Top work Rachel - this really shows you going to town with the language work so far and writing some top quality responses. Sections like:
ReplyDelete"this section of the text is a typical example of hedging in spoken language because Tulisa might feel under pressure from other things, such as the other judge’s complimentary comments, what the media might say, or audience reaction, that she has to be careful about critiquing Mischa so that she doesn’t create a negative image for herself."
are really strong, both in terms of how well they're applying a knowledge of AO1 terminology from the course and in how well they're linking to several different contextual factors here - this section and the section on Louis trying to appear as a kind of comical figure to the audience are particularly 'perceptive'.
TARGETS:
- Aim to sharpen theoretical links as you're starting to weave these in towards the end
- Try to consider to what extent this speech is spontaneous or planned - they have just watched the performance and had a little bit of time to formulate their comments, as well as years of experience speaking fluently on television/possible media training.
This is a really good homework though - excellent effort and something that makes you think a top grade here is a realistic prospect this year. Well done.